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@@ -4,8 +4,8 @@ title: Philippa Gardner, talk at the open Workshop on Consistency in Distributed
 Philippa Gardner gave at talk on A Concurrent Specification of PoSIX at the open workshop [“Consistency in distributed storage.”](https://pages.lip6.fr/Marc.Shapiro/workshop-2017-05-03/)
 held at the Université Pierre et Marie Curie - LIP6, Paris, France on 3 May 2017.
 
-The workshop, organised by [Marc Shapiro](https://pages.lip6.fr/Marc.Shapiro/) [(UPMC-LIP6 and  Inria)](https://www.inria.fr/) is an opportunity for students 
-and academics to share insights on the principles and practice of distributed data replication systems, 
+The workshop, organised by [Marc Shapiro](https://pages.lip6.fr/Marc.Shapiro/) [(UPMC-LIP6 and  Inria)](https://www.inria.fr/) offers students 
+and academics an opportunity to share insights on the principles and practice of distributed data replication systems, 
 based on solid distributed algorithm and engineering principles. This workshop is held under the aegis of the French ANR Project RainbowFS, 
 which aims to deconstruct consistency and to develop principled tools for the design, verification, deployment and monitoring, 
 and to use them for developing a correct-by-construction and efficient geo-scale petabyte-sized storage system.