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-title: Daiva Naudžiūnienė is moving to Facebook
+title: Daiva Naudžiūnienė moving to Facebook
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 Congratulations to [Daiva Naudžiūnienė](https://www.doc.ic.ac.uk/~dn911/), who is off to work for Facebook in the new year. 
 
-Daiva, who is currently finishing her Ph.D. on reasoning about JavaScript with Philippa Gardner, 
-spent three months as an intern working with the engineering team led by Peter O'Hearn. 
-Daiva did very well and now has been invited to join the company full time next year, 
-once she finishes her PhD.
+Daiva is currently finishing her Ph.D. on reasoning about JavaScript with Philippa Gardner. 
+Over the summer, she spent three months as an intern working with the engineering team led by Peter O'Hearn at Facebook. 
+Daiva did very well and was invited to join the company full time next year, once she finishes her PhD.